Re-reading
I’m in the process of re-reading,
And I see that I’m not tough enough,
Stuck in the frame of poetry,
It’s all too kind,
Although I thought when wind was up
That I was being rough and tough,
Dangerous, hard-hitting, harsh.
Now I see, it’s paper pap; mush.
I see I’m a marshmallow.
Next step:
Re-reading means re-writing –
Themes the same (because that’s me)
But biting, better and not butter,
Battering the rams against the thing
I’m fighting for.
Goodbye subtlety.
To hell with poetry.
For instance, I was reading
What I wrote on greed.
It was tippy, tippy toed.
Now I know, greed is greed:
Ravenous and hungry, self-indulgent.
All it wants and needs is more.
Craving, it knows no restraint.
A spade’s a spade,
And as I said,
I plan to call it that.
If poetry, may it not be
A patronizing softly, softly…
Who am I intent on moving,
Who do I intend to serve with verse
Of such a measly nerve?
No one? Someone?
That’s the question!
Re-reading 9.8.2012
The Processes: Creative, Thinking, Meditative II;
Arlene Corwin